UFS 211 - ACADEMIC READING AND WRITING

TASK 5 - WATER POLLUTION


Water is an important resource for human life and global life support system. Humans need water to carry out everyday activities such as agriculture, fisheries, industry, Carrier and others. However, water is increasingly polluted due to the irresponsible attitude of some people., Water pollution is defined as any direct or indirect changes to the physical properties, thermal, biological, or radioactive which any part of the environment of the release, issue , or put this waste to the detriment of its usefulness and cause a dangerous situation that endangered the health, safety and welfare of the public, or other life such as birds, wildlife, fish and aquatic life and water plants. Moreover, the attitude of some unscrupulous factory operators remove toxic waste into rivers or the sea also led to water pollution. Removal is considered simple because it has no disposal costs. The problem arises when the liquid chemical released into the river untreated and contain toxic substances that pollute water. The study showed the developed countries include radioactive waste into the drum before disposal into the sea. Oil spills that occur due to vessel collisions also lead to water pollution. The oil gushing into the sea due to leakage of the fuel tank will cover the layer of water and cause pollution sea. In conclusion, as a creature of God endowed mind, we should not be selfish but we need to support all the activities carried out by the government and private sector to ensure the hopes and dreams can be achieved.

TOPIC SENTENCES
-Water is an important resource for human life and global life support system.

SUPPORTING SENTENCES
-Humans need water to carry out everyday activities such as agriculture, fisheries, industry, Carrier and others. However, water is increasingly polluted due to the irresponsible attitude of some people., Water pollution is defined as any direct or indirect changes to the physical properties, thermal, biological, or radioactive which any part of the environment of the release, issue , or put this waste to the detriment of its usefulness and cause a dangerous situation that endangered the health, safety and welfare of the public, or other life such as birds, wildlife, fish and aquatic life and water plants. Moreover, the attitude of some unscrupulous factory operators remove toxic waste into rivers or the sea also led to water pollution. Removal is considered simple because it has no disposal costs. The problem arises when the liquid chemical released into the river untreated and contain toxic substances that pollute water. The study showed the developed countries include radioactive waste into the drum before disposal into the sea. Oil spills that occur due to vessel collisions also lead to water pollution. The oil gushing into the sea due to leakage of the fuel tank will cover the layer of water and cause pollution sea.

CONCLUDING SENTENCES
-we should not be selfish but we need to support all the activities carried out by the government and private sector to ensure the hopes and dreams can be achieved.