Friday 30 November 2012

UFS 211 - ACADEMIC READING AND WRITING

TASK 5 - WRITING A PARAGRAPH

PARAGRAPH 1

sports is a healthy way of life. we sports can also be fit. furthermore can enlighten the mind of society. also have many kinds of sports. just us determine where we interest and passion for sports. sports also prevent us away from dangerous diseases such as blood level higher, excess weight, heart disease and more. therefore, to prevent it is easy. the only way to give a bit of sport to protect from disease.

TOPIC SENTENCES
-Sport is a healthy way of life.

SUPPORTING SENTENCE
-can enlighten the mind of society. also have many kinds of sports. just us determine where we interest and passion for sports. sports also prevent us away from dangerous diseases such as blood level higher, excess weight, heart disease and more.

CONCLUDING SENTENCES
-only way to give a bit of sport to protect from disease.

PARAGRAPH 2

Environmental pollution has an adverse impact on the wildlife in the world currently. Between the main effects of humans as a result of environmental pollution is the air, temperature and other environment. Pollution in today's increasingly going from time to time. Indeed, environmental pollution adversely. Air pollution is a very bad impact on the plants in the world. The plants suffered damage in three ways, namely necrosis (leaf loss), Klorosis (color change), and changes in growth. Barley, cotton, wheat and apples are among the plants that are susceptible to damage by sulfur dioxide pollutants. In addition, tomatoes, beans, spinach and potatoes also suffered damage with the ozone gas. This resulted in the lack of land and food resources in the economy part of the earth's population is also affected. In conclusion, environmental pollution was harmful to the environment around the planet. I hope the authorities are able to monitor so this pollution can be reduced to life on this earth more comfortable.

TOPIC SENTENCES
-Environmental pollution has an adverse impact on the wildlife in the world currently.

SUPPORTING SENTENCES
- Pollution in today's increasingly going from time to time. Indeed, environmental pollution adversely. Air pollution is a very bad impact on the plants in the world. The plants suffered damage in three ways, namely necrosis (leaf loss), Klorosis (color change), and changes in growth. Barley, cotton, wheat and apples are among the plants that are susceptible to damage by sulfur dioxide pollutants. In addition, tomatoes, beans, spinach and potatoes also suffered damage with the ozone gas. This resulted in the lack of land and food resources in the economy part of the earth's population is also affected. 

CONCLUDING SENTENCES
-environmental pollution was harmful to the environment around the planet.



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